I wrote a poem. Would you give you opinion of it?

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IT’S RAINING

It’s raining raining raining.
There is grey up in the skys.
And the frogs are hippity hopping
And they might just get a whopping
If they don’t get home for dinner
With their little froggy wives.

Its raining raining raining
and I’m walking down the road
Its raining down on all the world
Its raining as I go.

I’m walking walking walking
down this bayou country lane
I’m walking walking walking
in a summer evening’s rain.

The frogs are hippity hopping.
There is rain from in the skies.
They are hippity hopping home to hearth
to visit with their wives.

Its raining raining raining
Its raining as I go
Its raining down on all the world.
and I’m walking down the road.
 
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