I wrote a poem, what do you think of it?

R

RedSox Fan

New member
Feelings churning
My heart aches
How bad do I want you?

Looking up.
I feel light headed,
Heavy hearted,
Confused,
Deep within I know
I know what I want

No boundaries face me
For this knows none
I can get want I want.
Us?

“Go for it.”
“What do you have to lose?”
Everything
Nothing
Please tell me
Tell me
Tell me,
Choose
Choose me

Can you grade it (A+,A,A-,B+ ect.)?
also, based on this poem how old do you think i am?
how can i change it to make it better?
you being critical of me not having set stanzas? wth?
 
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