I WROTE A POEM FOR MY FRIEND, AND IT DIDN'T EVEN PHASE HER!?

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Isn't that frustrating? I once tried the same type of thing, and it did nothing. What you have to do, and what will work better, is if you have an actual conversation with her. Maybe she thought that the poem was just that- a poem you wrote, were proud of, and wanted to show her. So you have to sit her down and have a conversation with her.

Good luck.
 
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that is soooooo good if my friend gave that to me i would start crying right there
 
i wrote this for my friend. to explain the way i feel. the way she makes me feel, ever since we got into middle school she is so caught up into being the best.



here is is:

~THE WAY YOU DONT SEE, THE WAY YOU TREAT ME.
~


i always try to talk to you,
about the pain you cause me.

i am hurting so bad,
but this, you can not see.


you go on, leaving me behind,
i fear losing a friend.

who i care for so much,
but it is coming to an end.


your getting caught up:
in all of the popularity,
and being the very best,
but you dont even see it sara,
the way you were before was your very best.


the person that you really are,
deep down inside,
the person who was this,
but now living in lies,
against her own self.


when i try to tell you this,
it ends in arguments and fighting.

which is the last thing i wanted with us.

i dont want the bickering, and the biting.


from that one day.

i walked into a full classroom,
seeing so many new faces,
just ready to grow and bloom.


but this little fourth grade girl,
red hair, and paled face,
and i plopped down in a seat next to her,
not knowing we would become such great friends
in that very place.
 
That poem was amazing and your friend seems very insensitive if she didn't show some emotion. Maybe you should find someone else to hang out with. She can't always be at the top and she'll want a real friend eventually.
 
That poem was amazing and your friend seems very insensitive if she didn't show some emotion. Maybe you should find someone else to hang out with. She can't always be at the top and she'll want a real friend eventually.
 
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