I would love feedback on these two photos!!?

[Sarah C]

and comments you have
would be greatly appreciated
thank you so much

http://i475.photobucket.com/albums/rr116/7danceada/picturessss/pool_adn_rooftop0439.jpg

http://i475.photobucket.com/albums/rr116/7danceada/picturessss/broken_camera_0445.jpg

http://i475.photobucket.com/albums/rr116/7danceada/picturessss/rehersal20072.jpg

http://i475.photobucket.com/albums/rr116/7danceada/picturessss/pool_with_erica0018.jpg
hahaha. scratch that
* four photos

 

[Emma]

I think you look the best in the first one.

 

[lennon legend]

i likey the last one

 

[Candid Chris]

I count four.

Although composition isn't too bad on all 'two', focus and exposure could be better X2.