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River Elise

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Upon whimsical skin, bright veins develope to decorate the ivory.
Ashes and mud create a dirty picture familiar to sleepy eyes, fighting to talk.
Chipped nail polish, reminding me of an abandoned house and its withered paint.
One I'd love to inhabit one day.
Security. If only it had crawled up on my lap to hold.
Upon a whimsical heart, I vanish to escape thoughts of isolation.
I pass by barely. By a string of ruined hair.
I notice you sitting there, dim colored and graceful like.
Almost watching with an unwanted passion.
Taking in the powedered air so smoothly.
Eyes gliding over fast paced bodies unnaturally high within themselves.
Males sniffing out estrogen with gigantic whiffs and greedy pounces.
Crossing over rows of faded blue jean knees to reach you...
To realize you're not even there.
So I leave.
 
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