I want to write an song, but not sound that im whining?

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Soda Pop Dumb

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Im trying to write lyrics, but the text is bit lame i think. Im trying to write a Rock/grunge song. Rate Please.
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Hey Kid
Do You Feel alone
Cheer Up, I Know
How you feel, been there too
learned My lesson
Outside is Cold
Want to be Inside
Only way in is Betrayal
Its Okey, Today,
Will Be worse everyday
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Rate Please and Motivation
 
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