I tried to write a rap!? =/?

Hi! I tried a little rap writing! Attempted in the style of Tinie Tempah...first song I've done like this so if it's cr*p...well, it's cr*p lol.

Yeah yeah,
I guess I feel wild,
You aint seem me in a while,
When I pick the phone up,
It’s you a dial,
And I feel like a wanna be near you,
Getting high getting slaughtered and hear you,
Call my name when you hear my song, song,
Learning how to get along, long,
And you say that you don’t give a damn,
That I’m a star and ima party on,
Yeah, yeah,
And ya feel me now,
Listen to the beat of the drum come and touch me now,
While the music’s playing and the bass is loud,
Come and party now,
Show me what you got don’t you let me down,
Say what?
Don’t you let me down.

Can you see the stars shine in the night sky,
Falling down on us,
In a magical way,
Bass line pumps in to my veins,
And I’m feeling oh,
So special things,
Yeah, and my Saturday nights,
Are all the same.

Yeah, yeah,
And you’re new to this child,
It’s a new damn beat for you don’t be shy,
And you say that you wonder why,
You wanna fly,
You wanna get so high that you touch the sky, yeah,
No one can go near you no one can get that high,
You’re so happy that it makes you wanna die, die,
Seeing my name in stars makes you feel alive, alive,
You wanna be near me in every way,
And you say that you’re not lying,
And you’re a star and you’re rocking on,
Yeah, yeah,
To the beat of the drum you’re kicking it,
In every way baby you’re bricking it,
Like you’ve never been a rock star before,
Yeah, you’ve never taken the mike and rocked a stage before,
Come and show me now,
What you got baby don’t you let me down, Now,
Come and show me now,
Say what?
Don’t you let me down.

Can you see the stars shine in the night sky,
Falling down on us,
In a magical way,
Bass line pumps in to my veins,
And I’m feeling oh,
So special things,
Yeah, and my Saturday nights,
Are all the same.

They’re all the same.

They’re all the same,
7 hours worth of fame,
We stay up till it feels so lame,
But it never really ever gets that way, hey,
Yah’ll wanna drink when you’re stressful,
But come on look your best girl,
Gotta get high, Gotta get a high,
Gotta make yourself fly, fly, fly,
Like maniac in the sky, sky, high,
Feeling fly, fly,
Yeah, yeah.

Can you see the stars shine in the night sky,
I can see them shining,
Shining above me,
Falling down on us,
In a magical way,
So magical,
So magical,
Bassline pumps in to my veins,
Yeah,
And I’m feeling oh,
So special things,
So special things yeah,
So special things,
So special things,
Yeah, and my Saturday nights,
Are all the same,
Yeah, yeah, they’re all the same,
And my Saturday nights,
Are all the same,
Yeah and I’m feeling wild..

=]
xx
 
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