I need poetry help?!?!?!?!?!?!?

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All right so I have a class in which I have to write a poem. I can usually write no prob, but right now I am having MAJOR writer's block. So I need you to tell me what you think and some help on what to say next. Oh and it is supposed to be kind of silly, but serious at the same time.
*Cheesey, but pronounced with the ee like a long a and ay instead of ey.

Life Is Dot Dot Dot Uhm...
by XXXXX XXXXXX

Life is lust.
Life is money.
Life is bust.
Life is funny.

All those statements are wrong
And I'll tell you what's right.
Now I promise not to keep you f'long,
So just hold tight.

Life has nothing to do with lust or money,
Not at all.
And it is most certainly not bust nor funny.
Wouldn't that be a ball?

Life is complicated.
So I'll start with the basics,
Unless you want your mind grated
Like chaesay* sticks.

Life is grand.
Life is colossal.
Yet life is bland.
And life is microscopical.

Life isn't ever fun.
Only the people in it are.
Life is run by a bum,
Whose name is Ka, and I saw in a star.


Now I just need the next line or two and I'll start back up. Thanks!
 
I never got the serious part. This is cute and funny but poetic? Not really. Still awesome though. You have good rhythm and you rhyme well.
 
I never got the serious part. This is cute and funny but poetic? Not really. Still awesome though. You have good rhythm and you rhyme well.
 
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