I need help with my story. please help. i feel like the rreader would be confused.?

Jane

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“Johnny I really had a good time,“ she wanted him to sleep over like Catherine’s other friends but it would be too hard and too awkward to act like nothing happened. Jean could not let him kiss her goodbye, she pushed him away as he inched closer. She covered her head with her arms and rushed him away from the house, she didn’t want to get caught with him and didn’t also didn‘t want him to get soaked from the rain. Jean knew if she looked him in the eye again she’d freeze up and tell him to stay. He jumped on his bike and rode into the rain.

(rewrite it and u win, anytips)
 
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