XxskittlesxX
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blue cloud, yellow cloud take me away
to green skys, purple mountains
i just want to see another day
dream golden dreams
and live in a world where happiness comes true
so i can escape from the darkness
that's made me a coward till this day
i will never abandon myself
only my virtues, but they can past by
just like the wind
and never come back again
but now i know that
the only thing i truely have is you
your smile will change everything
the skys will turn green and the mountains purple
for you, golden dreams come true
and fantasties are reality
but when you turn around
all my hope vanishes into thin air
were you ever here
or was this all a dream
it felt so real, you by my side
holding my hand
through the pain and darkness
and now when the sun shines
you're gone, like the wind
like my virtues
and the self i abandoned wont come back
only you can take me to the place where
the skys are green, the mountains purple
and dreams are golden
i wasnt really thinkin when i wrote it , it was just some random thoughts i put together while listenin to one of my favorite songs. do you think you can help me improve this poem please? =D
thanks you. criticism is welcomed.
to green skys, purple mountains
i just want to see another day
dream golden dreams
and live in a world where happiness comes true
so i can escape from the darkness
that's made me a coward till this day
i will never abandon myself
only my virtues, but they can past by
just like the wind
and never come back again
but now i know that
the only thing i truely have is you
your smile will change everything
the skys will turn green and the mountains purple
for you, golden dreams come true
and fantasties are reality
but when you turn around
all my hope vanishes into thin air
were you ever here
or was this all a dream
it felt so real, you by my side
holding my hand
through the pain and darkness
and now when the sun shines
you're gone, like the wind
like my virtues
and the self i abandoned wont come back
only you can take me to the place where
the skys are green, the mountains purple
and dreams are golden
i wasnt really thinkin when i wrote it , it was just some random thoughts i put together while listenin to one of my favorite songs. do you think you can help me improve this poem please? =D
thanks you. criticism is welcomed.