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this is my paragraph:
Standing tall on her bright red boots with her sky blue suit and jet black hair, Cyclonic Princess is Dappersville’s new super hero. Cyclonic Princess’s alter ego is Sarah Baker, a ballet teacher at the local studio, when classes close for the night she uses the studio for her heroic plans. It all began when Sarah was just 15 years old, she was caught in a very harsh cyclonic storm and ended up in a coma. When Sarah awoke from her coma she had super powers which were cyclonic speed and invincibility. On her body suit she has a picture of a green cyclone which resembles her powers and how everything began.
i need a sentence to kind of sum up the paragraph.
please help. i promis i will not copy it straight i just need some ideas.
plus i would just like to know how old you think i am according to this paragraph structure.
Standing tall on her bright red boots with her sky blue suit and jet black hair, Cyclonic Princess is Dappersville’s new super hero. Cyclonic Princess’s alter ego is Sarah Baker, a ballet teacher at the local studio, when classes close for the night she uses the studio for her heroic plans. It all began when Sarah was just 15 years old, she was caught in a very harsh cyclonic storm and ended up in a coma. When Sarah awoke from her coma she had super powers which were cyclonic speed and invincibility. On her body suit she has a picture of a green cyclone which resembles her powers and how everything began.
i need a sentence to kind of sum up the paragraph.
please help. i promis i will not copy it straight i just need some ideas.
plus i would just like to know how old you think i am according to this paragraph structure.