ok i am trying to figure out if my main character shud meet this guy, im only 5 pages in to the first capter but i have also have a 5 pg prologue. shud i brinng out this guy so early in the book? here's my teaser for the book
Teaser
After a near fatal accident, Hailey Glenmore is forced to live with her uncle in Manhattan, New York. However during the accident, Hailey’s mother had suddenly disappeared. Everyone tells her that her mother died a year ago, but Hailey is sure of what happened. Then Hailey meets Cam. Cam is mysterious and is protective of Hailey from the moment they meet. Hailey begins to feel that there is something that she is not being told. Suddenly through a whirlwind of events, Hailey is told that she was adopted. Not only that, she is also told that her mom and uncle are vampires. Hailey’s perspective of who she is now has changed and questions begin to plague her. What happened to Hailey’s real parents? And what happened to the person, or rather vampire, she called “Mom”? Who can she believe now? And another thing who exactly is Cam?
Teaser
After a near fatal accident, Hailey Glenmore is forced to live with her uncle in Manhattan, New York. However during the accident, Hailey’s mother had suddenly disappeared. Everyone tells her that her mother died a year ago, but Hailey is sure of what happened. Then Hailey meets Cam. Cam is mysterious and is protective of Hailey from the moment they meet. Hailey begins to feel that there is something that she is not being told. Suddenly through a whirlwind of events, Hailey is told that she was adopted. Not only that, she is also told that her mom and uncle are vampires. Hailey’s perspective of who she is now has changed and questions begin to plague her. What happened to Hailey’s real parents? And what happened to the person, or rather vampire, she called “Mom”? Who can she believe now? And another thing who exactly is Cam?