I need Help comming up with the first 2-3 sentances of my college essay. Everything that i come up with sounds horrible or like a gimmick. I am intrested in Animals, and would like to persue a career in Animal Science. The college that i am thinking of give me the option of "ask a question the at you wish we had asked you" I would like to make up a question of 'why should u be accepted into our school" which is very blunt and simple. I am my own motivator beucase i feel like as i grew up, i could not depend for support on anyone but myself on my schoolwork. At a young age i was independent, working in my family business making money. My independence allowed me to take on new adventures so i participated on a chruch mission trip to honduras where i helped out orphans, donated toiletres to the poor by doing 'street ministry' and overall making a difference. caring for those kids make me realize life for what it really is and made me belive that i can benifit the world with my motivation to suceed. I am currently intrested in animals and am determined to become an animal scientist....
thats basically my general idea of my introduction/ essay. pleae help me come up with an awesome sounding first 2-3 sentances that iwll pull the reader in and stand out from the rest of the essays.
thats basically my general idea of my introduction/ essay. pleae help me come up with an awesome sounding first 2-3 sentances that iwll pull the reader in and stand out from the rest of the essays.