I Need A title For a book I'm writing!?

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breannanicole9630

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ok so im writing a book, i have the entire plot done i just havent written it yet. the reason i havent written it is because i want to put it on a writting website like quizilla or something and to do that you need a title. so heres a little info
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ok so the main characther, Luna, is forced to move to her aunt ellies house after her father dies in a car acident and her mom is sent to rehab [she was deppresed after her husbands death]
there she meets blake. a nice, yet ackward boy, who has amazing blue eyes. and his sister lilly, who also seems as if she has somthing to hide . after luna and blake get closer, lilly [who is usally the sweet nice younger sister] flips out on luna saying to stay away from blake, thats luna has no idea how selfish he can get and that lilly does.

luna ingnors her comments and gets closer to blake, after a couple mouths, blake turns her into a wizard for his own selfish game. luna is than exposed to a whole new world she new nothing of. she even finds out that was lilly was never even blakes sister, but an old girlfriend he changed into a wizard many years eairlier. she demands that blake change her back, because she found out these wizards are immortal, and she doesnt want that. blake explains that he cant do that, only the rayal wizard family in england can do that, and they cant even do this until the wizard goes on a dangourous journey.

luna goes all the way to england and starts the journey. she starts out strong, but than gets attaked by some sort of monster [havent dicided yet on what kind] but is saved my another wizard, who is also on the journey. the wizard was a boy named eric who also doesnt want to be a wizard.

together the travel long ways and fight hard, and they finally make it through. but their relasphionship has grown to a new level, and even after becoming mortal again they still cant leave each others side.

the next chapter basicly explains the fallowing years. and the mildstones of their life, like getting married, having kids so on and so on. then in basicly the last chapter luna just sits there lettinging her mind wonder and and remembering how beauty came from her pain.
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ok so yes that its!!
please be nice!
no rude comments unless it will help my story!
and dont think about harry potter when you read this, these wizard are evil!!!! [grrrrr] [[ssorry couldnt resist]
ps
sorry for spelling mistakes i had to do this real quick and get some sleep!!!!!!
ok so i just want to say im like 13 so yes keep that in mind ok thx!
i thought i would write a little of the 1st chapter for you guys, ok thx!
starting....now
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i stared out my new window trying to firmilarize the surroundings of this new place i was supposed to call home. this is wrong!! this was never supposed to happen, not to me aleast. the nice quiet girl from new york that had everything, everything but the neciesities (sp). like a father, a loving mother, a safe household. 3 years since the turning point of my life, and it made a turn for the worst.

3 years, 4 months, and 6 days ago was that turning point. accourding to police reports, its was just a normal car acident, happened every day, but i dont loss my dad every day. and to top that off thats when things really got bad.
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thats all i can put without going over so thx alot. and i guess i do want to see if my plot is ok so thx [lol i said thx so many times]
 
road to mortality? im not sure. it sounds like a good idea sorta, but kinda hard to define. you should play around with words that connect to the story. it would be better if there was moe detail than just the basic outline, but obviously you haven't written that far yet. you can play round with some of the more arcane ideas of magic and pick a spell for the title
 
Seriously, if you have the talent to write an entire book, you should be able to think of a suitable title without help.
This inclines me to think this isn't an honest question. What you're really seeking is approval of your idea (although you already realise it is derivative, trite). If you're young, you have time to learn the art of writing good fiction. There are many good advice books that you can learn from if you're wise enough to seek advice from those who have already walked that path.
Another way to improve your ideas is to use what you've already read e.g. Harry Potter books, not to guide as to what your book should be like, but to guide you in the exact opposite way i.e. if your idea is like anything you've already read, change it. You must find originality or you'll always be criticised for copying, stealing ideas. Do not be mislead by famous writers such as Philip Pullman, who say that 'all writer's' steal their ideas'. This is only possible if the writer also happens to be very good at covering that fact up (as he is, I suppose).
 
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