Hey guys,
so this is my poem which I wrote a few years ago, I recently decided that it needs a name !
any sugestions ... and if you have any feedback on my poem that would be fantastic !!
you wished upon a star
it was a fake
another star comes along
it was a failure
you wish upon the third star
it was useless and gave you nothing
so you wish apon a fourth star
it took everything from you and left you with despair
so you stop believing in the stars
and you learn to live
without any stars, because they are untrue
but still you are disappointed with the lies they told you
you have this shotgun in your hand
and then this lone star comes along one night
splendid in such a dark space
you shot it
hit it
it exploded, shattered
it was the only star intended for you
and it was true
so this is my poem which I wrote a few years ago, I recently decided that it needs a name !
any sugestions ... and if you have any feedback on my poem that would be fantastic !!
you wished upon a star
it was a fake
another star comes along
it was a failure
you wish upon the third star
it was useless and gave you nothing
so you wish apon a fourth star
it took everything from you and left you with despair
so you stop believing in the stars
and you learn to live
without any stars, because they are untrue
but still you are disappointed with the lies they told you
you have this shotgun in your hand
and then this lone star comes along one night
splendid in such a dark space
you shot it
hit it
it exploded, shattered
it was the only star intended for you
and it was true