I just wrote this poem, what do you think?

Jordan

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I just decided yesterday I wanted to start writing poems. This is my second one so far. Please let me know what you think.


As I look in your eyes

I am mesmerized

Your vessels of silent word

sing as loud as a bird

Telling a story of sorrow

that I wish I could borrow

and in time fix all the errors

that yearn to be less than terrors

Your pupils tear apart

a piece of my heart

but it is the price i pay

for looking your way

and again i fear

to take a a glance in a mirror...
 
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