i just wrote this poem? i guess it was how i felt. can u plz tell me what u think

C

Connor

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of it? all comments welcome? first time for everything

the first time i met you,
automatically fell for you,
as i got to know you more,
i fell for you deeper,
like grew into love,
when we first kissed,
you took my breath,
completely away,
when we kissed,
for the second time,
beneath the midnight sky,
i knew we were forever.

well........ all answers are welcome
 
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