I just made this poem up cause i felt like it... is it good?

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this is about my life and coral my piggie who passed and cuppy my piggie who tis new!

Down this path
over and over again
winter spring summer autumn
snow green grass sun and leaves

Wind from every direction
choices from everything
imagine flying
a spirit so free

Oh her name is Coral
so lovable she be
i miss her so
but now she is free
free from the pain
she once suffered
pnuemonia it was

Tears soaked my face from
the loss
Heart snapped in 2
Alone to cry

Grief covers thy heart
tears flood my face
separated from thy true friend
forever more

Left to breath alone
left to cry
left to live like rock torn from shoulder
left to live forever more

time passes things happen
once in april
spring sprung on the 29th
a cupcake there was

Oh happy i found a friend again
But still not whole
loss still wonders in the dark of the heart
just covered up with joy of a new piggy

Cupcake was her name
so silky and soft
black and brown
small and cute
sweet and funny

I found mothely feel again
one baby tis cupcake
i love cupcake my piggy now
but i cry as my heart still
tis in past for thy coral

i tryed to make it sound as if it was written in the olden days and its about my life then about the loss of my guinea pig coral and how its effected me then its about how i found a new friend my new piggy cupcake but she didnt replace coral she helped me
so tell me if you think it was good or not i just made it up on the spot cause i felt like it , not mean comment plz just nice ones and tell me if you think it was gd...???????????
 
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