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There are three main pacts in this story:
Libertators- The good guys. Main Characters are mostly in it
Death Raiders- Bad guys. Everyone is after them.
Revelin- Hates the Libertators but dispises the Death Raiders for taking land from them more.
Rate them 1-10 and tell me why you gave them that rating! Tell me what you would also call these creatures!
1
Razbrig:
Human- body, neck, head
Dragon- wings
Male- Black + scaley/rough texture
Female- purple + silky soft
Controls when to use their wings
Giant black scars on their backs on each side of the spine
Flys + walks for movement
Uses shadows for energy + attacks
Has its own language
Only some of them can use magic, like the main character + king
Razboi- Romanian- war
Umbra- Latin- shadow
2
Foctura
Human- head, neck
Skeletal- body
Black eyes
Flames surround them
Only way to die- decapitation
Only uses magic to put back dismantled body parts
Two-handed sword:
Inner blade- painted red
Outer blade- grey
Invincible to arrows
Roman words:
Foc- fire
Latin words:
Creatura- creature
3
Bellinger:
head- human
mouth- human
-teeth- like a cougar
hands- 1 claw, 1 human
back- eagle wings at all times
body- human
Deadly poisonous bites- not all fatal bites
Wears bear fur on body
Red eyes to scare enemies
Flys at fast rates
Members of another rebellion, Revelin, that wants to defeat the Death Raiders but hate the other rebellion, the Liberators
Bellum- latin- war
inger- romanian- angel
4
Imoraund:
alligator- whole body resembling one w/ tail
human- stands up + walks like a human
Tail- Snake or something flexible
uses water for attacks
intelligent creature
uses magic
uses tail to choke enemies
I am expecting to make this a Water God
Only one of this race
Intuneric- Romanian- dark
Moarte- romanian- death
Vormund- german- guardian
5
Fulgatia:
Head- Bull
arms- two human arms- one on each side
- four octupus tentacles- 2 on each side
body- human body covered in rhino skin
- shark gills
Back- shark fin to help it travel faster in water
Shocks enemies with tentacles
-electricity
Bull horns create electricity energy balls to hurt opponents
Must cut off octupus tentacles or decapitate to kill it
One of this race
Brother to Imoraund
Fulger- Romanian- lightning
Distrugaton- Romanian- destruction
Tell me any suggestions you would do for the creatures I mentioned. Also some names for each!
THANK YOU!!!
There are three main pacts in this story:
Libertators- The good guys. Main Characters are mostly in it
Death Raiders- Bad guys. Everyone is after them.
Revelin- Hates the Libertators but dispises the Death Raiders for taking land from them more.
Rate them 1-10 and tell me why you gave them that rating! Tell me what you would also call these creatures!
1
Razbrig:
Human- body, neck, head
Dragon- wings
Male- Black + scaley/rough texture
Female- purple + silky soft
Controls when to use their wings
Giant black scars on their backs on each side of the spine
Flys + walks for movement
Uses shadows for energy + attacks
Has its own language
Only some of them can use magic, like the main character + king
Razboi- Romanian- war
Umbra- Latin- shadow
2
Foctura
Human- head, neck
Skeletal- body
Black eyes
Flames surround them
Only way to die- decapitation
Only uses magic to put back dismantled body parts
Two-handed sword:
Inner blade- painted red
Outer blade- grey
Invincible to arrows
Roman words:
Foc- fire
Latin words:
Creatura- creature
3
Bellinger:
head- human
mouth- human
-teeth- like a cougar
hands- 1 claw, 1 human
back- eagle wings at all times
body- human
Deadly poisonous bites- not all fatal bites
Wears bear fur on body
Red eyes to scare enemies
Flys at fast rates
Members of another rebellion, Revelin, that wants to defeat the Death Raiders but hate the other rebellion, the Liberators
Bellum- latin- war
inger- romanian- angel
4
Imoraund:
alligator- whole body resembling one w/ tail
human- stands up + walks like a human
Tail- Snake or something flexible
uses water for attacks
intelligent creature
uses magic
uses tail to choke enemies
I am expecting to make this a Water God
Only one of this race
Intuneric- Romanian- dark
Moarte- romanian- death
Vormund- german- guardian
5
Fulgatia:
Head- Bull
arms- two human arms- one on each side
- four octupus tentacles- 2 on each side
body- human body covered in rhino skin
- shark gills
Back- shark fin to help it travel faster in water
Shocks enemies with tentacles
-electricity
Bull horns create electricity energy balls to hurt opponents
Must cut off octupus tentacles or decapitate to kill it
One of this race
Brother to Imoraund
Fulger- Romanian- lightning
Distrugaton- Romanian- destruction
Tell me any suggestions you would do for the creatures I mentioned. Also some names for each!
THANK YOU!!!