How would you write the following in good English?

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At the end of September 2007 I was given redundant by Motorola so I decided to have some months as I was giving enough money to live for a few month in redundant package off till February 2008 that I started working with an Agency for Renault. I will be off next week so I will not be able to respond till 12th December.
 
At the end of Sept. 2007, I was made redundant by Motorola. My redundancy package was enough to allow me to take a few months off. I was then employed by an Agency for Renault in February of 2008. I will be on vacation next week, so I will not be able to respond until the 12th December.
 
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