How would you write the following in good English as I am Italian learning English?

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sahra

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'' We talked last week and I left (X)
I have found a new dating site that is free and its much better than (X) where you can use webcam, Voice , blogs, videos and we can play games while we can get to know eachother. the new site is (X)and its so good! I have webcam and voice with a friend and its great and it has an IM and email and so many things, Sorry I did not email you before. I heard its new and started a few days ago I think.
I hope I can see you here so we can talk as in (X) I could never send messages. My name there is Sarahsea so you can see my picture there and hopefully we can webcam
 
We talked last week and I left (X). I have since found a fantastic new dating site, called (new site's name), that is free and much better than (X). On it, you can use webcam, voice, blogs, and videos. You can also play games while you get to know each other. It has IM and email and so many other things as well!

Sorry I didn't email you before. I heard of the new site and started on it a few days ago, I think. I hope I will see you on (new site's name) so we can talk just like on (X). My name on (new site's name) is Sarahsea. You can see my picture there, and hopefully we can get on webcam!
 
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