How old do you think I was when I wrote this poem?

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Loving Kitty

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Chaos Storm, Heart Ride

My mind starts spinning into storm of chaos.
The power grows to the point when I lose all thought...Â*
Typing, deleting, retyping, rewriting.
Too many emotions flowing, nowÂ*distraught.Â*

Anger flashes through me like a wild fire,Â*
Depression seeps all through me, and freezes like ice.Â*
Both moving together, twirling and dancing.Â*
Choking off any slither of thoughts concise.Â*

My mind, past the point of any understanding,Â*
Filled with pain, hurt. Im bleeding now Im dying
All I can see are your bright flashing words,Â*
Neon in my eyes, Im sad now Im cryingÂ*

You need to know what I mean when I say I'm scared,Â*
Understand the words that free themselves from the storm.Â*
You say Im a tiger, yet Im made of glass,Â*
I can break. Im a delicate art form.

You just cant say our friendship is failing to meÂ*
That I'm losing the only thing I have. Never, please.Â*
Please don't push me into that chilling black hole.
The one that makes my cold stuttering heart freeze.Â*

You flicker from one direction to the other!
You talk of losing our old friendship, but then
You yearn for love and bestow me kisses sweet!
And my mind goes wild again!

And then you finally seem to figure it out,
And see this story through my eyes, from my side,
But now the sun has set and its time to sleep.
And my heart gets off your roller coster ride.


Thank you for reading, and please answer honestly!
 
It seems that you were old enough to come to reality with how life can suck sometimes so I'm going to say between the ages of 13-16
can't really say because reality can hit earlier or later in the early teen years

so there ya go I answered :)
 
It seems that you were old enough to come to reality with how life can suck sometimes so I'm going to say between the ages of 13-16
can't really say because reality can hit earlier or later in the early teen years

so there ya go I answered :)
 
16 years, 4 months, 19 days, 5hours 34 minutes,16 seconds old the moment you finished it ;) I don't know I guess-timated haha. Was I the closest without going over? In my honest humble opinion give it a 8 for the imagery, but I give the 2nd and 3rd stanza alone a 10! Loved your poem, post more.
 
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