I was staring with my mouth wide open, peaking through the tinniest gap I could manage through the blinds. What I was seeing was literally a matter of life or death for the one trapped in the devils lair. I knew her since she came to Saint Montgomery boarding school. She was quiet like all of us. Cindy was oblivious to how vulnerable she was to the Secret Society. In fact they were making themselves a large scene, not bothering to stay hidden whilst cornering their victim. Cindy was only 12 and if she was caught by the Secret Society, she might as well be gone forever.
They are mysteriously smart, strong, agile and quick at everything. Even more suspicious to this matter is that they are all like this: Stronger, faster, smarter and more rapid than most people. In fact, people believe they have super powers. At the brink of death, they were able to come back to life. It was absurd to believe they had super powers but instead had discovered something highly valuable to all beings – which they were keeping a secret.
Cindy, dressed all in black, was slowly creeping through the bushes, oblivious to the people silently following her. Guilt was slowly over powering me, shouting at me to save Cindy! But I knew the risk to my own life at even stepping foot outside my shelter.
The moon was ablaze in the sky, shining so bright that it was hard to believe it was the only light supporting the town. I finally decided that leaving Cindy to cross paths with the Secret Society was an unforgivable thing to watch. I grabbed my knife and stashed it in the hidden compartment at the bottom of my shoe. With that, I ran onto the street like a bullet.
I know it's not perfect and may have a few grammatical issues but I would like to know how this small chapter is. It should be a little bit confusing by the way. Criticism is welcome but don't be too harsh. I am still learning. Thanks.
They are mysteriously smart, strong, agile and quick at everything. Even more suspicious to this matter is that they are all like this: Stronger, faster, smarter and more rapid than most people. In fact, people believe they have super powers. At the brink of death, they were able to come back to life. It was absurd to believe they had super powers but instead had discovered something highly valuable to all beings – which they were keeping a secret.
Cindy, dressed all in black, was slowly creeping through the bushes, oblivious to the people silently following her. Guilt was slowly over powering me, shouting at me to save Cindy! But I knew the risk to my own life at even stepping foot outside my shelter.
The moon was ablaze in the sky, shining so bright that it was hard to believe it was the only light supporting the town. I finally decided that leaving Cindy to cross paths with the Secret Society was an unforgivable thing to watch. I grabbed my knife and stashed it in the hidden compartment at the bottom of my shoe. With that, I ran onto the street like a bullet.
I know it's not perfect and may have a few grammatical issues but I would like to know how this small chapter is. It should be a little bit confusing by the way. Criticism is welcome but don't be too harsh. I am still learning. Thanks.