how is this poem?????

A relationship so pure,
when it all became a blur.
Got caught up with drugs,
forgot about the hugs.
And they took me away,
You begged for me to stay.
But it was too late,
our family was to separate.
I called you everyday,
talked hour after hour.
You told me
"honey, I'll get you back with all my power"
But that day you stop calling,
and would pick up.
Is when i lost all hope,
ran out of luck.
I cried and cried,
I tried and tried,
to forget all about you,
which was something i could never do.
So i just waited,
anticipated.
When i heard a ring,
and my heart began to sing.
It was you,
mom,
who left me blue.
You announced a big surprise,
you said i should close my eyes,
turn off the phone,
and say good bye.
The directions i followed,
then took a big sallow.
A tap on my back,
my mind comes on track.
A voice I recognize,
I opened my taring eyes,
and i knew it was you.

is this good for 13/
 
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