How is this poem I wrote?

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It's called Another Chance and I wrote it on a sad day. Tell me if you get the meaning or if you like it or hate it. Thanks

You look up at the sky and it looks to be in pain

You wish that this world could be dismissed of the rain

You take a step backwards and breathe in the afternoon air

You close your eyes and imagine happiness there

You clench your teeth and fall to your knees

You sigh to yourself as a gesture of please

You begin to map out your mind in search for a reason

You know your mistakes have stretched in every season

You apologize to yourself for all your mistakes

You feel yourself soften as every limb begins to ache

You know this new feeling as the old one disappears

You open your eyes and the darkness of the sky clears
 
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