How is this poem I wrote?

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As time goes by
My love for you grows
Ill love you forever
And I hope you know
It amazes me how you always make me smile
I’m happy with you
I feel like a little child
One who has unlocked
The truth of love
Not knowing how, but thanking almighty above
I love you with each gone dusk and new dawn
Knowing my love for you
Will never be gone
I give you this necklace to cherish and hold
Because I know our love will only grow
And with you Hannah
My heart will never run cold
My love for you grows everyday
And it will never fade
Our love is strong
Breaking apart is not a fear
I love you each and every day in each and every way
And our love will grow like the diamonds here
And I know the end is never near
Therefore I do not fear
No need for me to shed a tear
I love you Hannah
And that’s all I have for you to hear.<3



Help me fix it up!!:)
 
As time goes by
My love for you grows
Ill love you forever
And I hope you know
It amazes me how you always make me smile
I’m so happy with you
I feel like a little child
One who has unlocked
The truth of love
Not knowing how, but thanking the Almighty above
I love you with each gone dusk and new dawn
Knowing my love for you
Will never be gone
I give you this necklace to cherish and hold
Because I know our love will only grow
And with you Hannah
My heart will never run cold
My love for you grows everyday
And it will never fade
Our love is strong
Breaking apart is not a fear
I love you each and every day in each and every way
And our love will grow like the diamonds here
And I know the end is never near
Therefore I do not fear
No need for me to shed a tear
I love you Hannah
And that’s all I have for you to hear.<3


I love your poem --and she will too.
It is great to have someone sit down and put feelings on paper.
God bless both of you.
 
As time goes by
My love for you grows
Ill love you forever
And I hope you know
It amazes me how you always make me smile
I’m so happy with you
I feel like a little child
One who has unlocked
The truth of love
Not knowing how, but thanking the Almighty above
I love you with each gone dusk and new dawn
Knowing my love for you
Will never be gone
I give you this necklace to cherish and hold
Because I know our love will only grow
And with you Hannah
My heart will never run cold
My love for you grows everyday
And it will never fade
Our love is strong
Breaking apart is not a fear
I love you each and every day in each and every way
And our love will grow like the diamonds here
And I know the end is never near
Therefore I do not fear
No need for me to shed a tear
I love you Hannah
And that’s all I have for you to hear.<3


I love your poem --and she will too.
It is great to have someone sit down and put feelings on paper.
God bless both of you.
 
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