How is this poem for my friend ? 1-10?

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Your what i'd call
a best friend
the person who'd be there
until the very end
or maybe i'd say
your like an older sister
we'd stay up all night
just playing twister :P
We both play softball
or at least we try
but when were in our uniforms,
it's a sight for sore eyes :)
Your tentacles are kinda scary
but i didnt really mind
Just as long as
their the non-poisonous kind =D
Im really going to miss
seeing you at softball
but on the plus side
i could always give you a call
Well maybe that's
only a plus for me
but oh well you know
that you love me kinney!
And how could i forget
about those magnificent twinkies
dave middleton would just love
to give you some hickeys !
What im trying to say is
that your my best friend
my older sister who
i'll love 'til the end.
 
the 4 range. It reminds me of the poems i read while editting for literary magazine in high school. Rather generic. However, when written specifically for a person, it becomes sentimental, so you might still have a chance. :) It has to be judged differently when it's personal.
 
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