How is this for a composition?

Manders

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NEED HELP REVISING COMP!
I am in Japanese 101 and I needed to write a comp. about my thanksgiving week.
anything helps! :)
(except those online babel fish translators -.-)
I know I kept switching a lot between katakana and romaji, but it's a pain to write in japanese on a computer. Also keep in mind I have not learned a lot of kanji or adjectives yet.

Here it is:

?? ??? ? ?????????
I woke up early on sunday.

?? San Diego ???????
My older brother came to San Diego.

??? ???Los Angeles ?????
Also, I went to Los Angeles on Monday.

????????
My brother did too.

????????????????????
I bought a bag. It was expensive.

????????????
I watched a movie on tuseday.

??? starbucks hot chocolate ???????
Also, I drank a lot of hot chocolate at starbucks.

?? ??? ????? ??????
I came back to San Diego on wednesday.

????????
My brother did too.

???? ??? ? ???????? ??????? ? ??? ? ?? tostadas ??turkey???????????
My family had, ice cream fruit salad, vegetables, meat tostadas, but no turkey on thursday.

????? ??? new york???????
My Brother went to New York on friday.

???????????????????
I did not do homework.

????????????????!
Also, my thanksgiving week was fun.

I also have issues with using particles clearly. Anything helps!

??????????!
 
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