how is my poem?

[vini]

to,
cutiee

ma cutest one...
i'll be near...
you are my
dearest one...
ma teddy bear...

dont let
ur lashes weep...
just go to a
lovely sleep...

a pillow of hopes...
a blanket of love...
bed of silk ropes...
angels sent
sleep from above...

hey ma cutie pie...
why ur lashes
are not drie...
was it a bad dream...
why did you scream...
oh honey,
by mistake...
a beautiful dream
now you take...


with luv
vini

 

[Kavya R]

that's beautiful. You deserve a star for that one. Write more!

 

[bobo:D]

thats cute. i like it.
ill give it a star...