HOW IS MY POEM I just wrote? Poetry?

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For so long I,
Have felt alone.
Content to live with unrest,
Longing faded into countless.
Nights that buried my,
Weary heart but,
You brought an end,
To this dead hour,
And meaning to,
A calloused life.

These thoughts will carry m
Through the darkest nights,
While your eyes rest in...
These thoughts will carry me,
Through the darkest nights,
While your eyes rest in mine.

I remember the way you looked,
At me not the way you drew,
With one deep sigh,
Scattering pieces of my,
My restless mind.
Forgetting all that we,
We have left behind.
 
this poem flows really well, alot like song lyrics I am no Professional poet but I love your style I feel that I can relate to your words.
 
This is a great poem, a sweet tribute to your love and your friend. I loved how it developed and the ending and how I felt. Both times I read it I sighed a great deep breath and everything came together.
It made me smile. Thank you.
 
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