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Ends with Clarie trying to get Eli before Fitz shows up, but he does as it was in the original. They go through Eli pushing Clarie away for cover, Fitz talks down to Eli while holding the knife. Eli asks, "Don't do this" BUT THEN a cop comes running down the hall saying freeze, Fitz doesn't care and attempts to stab Eli, but is shot by the cop, and Eli looks like he got stabbed, and both him and Fitz fall (commerical break). Comes back with Fitz having a blanket over him caues hes dead from the shot, and Eli and Clarie are outside shooken up as in the original.
While Holly J. strips for Sav, Declan shows up unannonced and sees it, crushing him. He goes off crying.
Alli almosts gets raped by Owen but Drew jumps down and they fight. They bang against a lever that raises the heat of the boiler to exploide. But all three of them make it out in time to survive, but Drew is burned so he can't play sports next season which brings drama to his life.
Ends with Simpson saying what he said in the origina. THE END.
How was my version on a 1-10 scale (10 being the best)
Ends with Clarie trying to get Eli before Fitz shows up, but he does as it was in the original. They go through Eli pushing Clarie away for cover, Fitz talks down to Eli while holding the knife. Eli asks, "Don't do this" BUT THEN a cop comes running down the hall saying freeze, Fitz doesn't care and attempts to stab Eli, but is shot by the cop, and Eli looks like he got stabbed, and both him and Fitz fall (commerical break). Comes back with Fitz having a blanket over him caues hes dead from the shot, and Eli and Clarie are outside shooken up as in the original.
While Holly J. strips for Sav, Declan shows up unannonced and sees it, crushing him. He goes off crying.
Alli almosts gets raped by Owen but Drew jumps down and they fight. They bang against a lever that raises the heat of the boiler to exploide. But all three of them make it out in time to survive, but Drew is burned so he can't play sports next season which brings drama to his life.
Ends with Simpson saying what he said in the origina. THE END.
How was my version on a 1-10 scale (10 being the best)