How does this paragraph of my book sound?

K-Sweet

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I could hear the screams and gunshots from the main room. My mother quickly shut the door, and unbenounced to her out of her life. Neither of my parents survived that horrid night. Once again I'm getting ahead of myself. I felt an unfirmilar presence enter the room. I looked through the slits. My mother was being backed against the closet door by some demon. I saw his face. I saw Satan's face. Ten rounds fired into my mothers heart. It would never beat again. Her crimson blood stained my flesh more and more with each round. Satan was reaching to open the door, but something stopped him.
My mother must of been that angel. I heard them leave, but I dared not leave my hiding place. For I would go made if I saw the horrific scene. I lay there for what felt like centuries, just waiting to die. One day two girls entered the room. I reconized them as the man who killed my parents daughters. Their names are Adrina Marietta and Camilla Madellina Moretti.
It's only in Kaden's pov once so I'm trying to explain how he got to the point where he became the way he is now
 
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