How does this ode to my best friend sound so far?

tb! :)

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My dearest friend, I love you so
For all the things you do for me

You keep me laughing all through the day
Not a time in my life without a smile on my face

No matter how much I mess up
You never judge my mistakes

You give me advice when im in need
And wipe my tears in time of grief



any ideas to finish it off or make it better.. i need four more lines at least
 
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