Pretty in Pink
New member
Hi. I'm back. Again. Anyways, I finally thought of what my story was and decided to see if people liked the blurb. The story needs to be fleshed out more, all the final details of the plot perfected, but besides that, this is basically it:
They are among us. They look like us. They talk like us. But they are not us. They do not belong. They are deadly hunters, and their purpose is to blend in and kill. They will kill children and mothers and helpless women. They show no mercy.
A handful of people have been chosen to rise up against them, to infiltrate them, to wipe them out. Twelve. Our purpose is kept a secret and our identities remain hidden.
Our mission is to take out the Others, to wipe them out, to destroy them. Take wary in what you see. Look beyond it.
Because in this world, everyone is prey.
How does it sound? And if it is like anything else you have heard of, please tell me. And if you don't like it, be honest, state why and give an alternative. Anyways, to the BQ's.
BQ: Where do you write your stories, and for how long
BQ2: Give me a brief sentence about your book. Do you plan on getting it published?
BQ3 (answer only if publishing) Who do you want to be publish your book?
BQ4: Do you have an agent, and what are the strong points of having one?
BQ5: Any tips when publishing?
BQ6: What font do you write in, and why?
BQ7: How long (ideally) should an author write for?
BQ8: When sending a cover letter to the publisher, is it okay to state the illustratior/choice of illustrators you wish to illustrate the books (and tips on cover letters)
Thanx and have a nice day!
They are among us. They look like us. They talk like us. But they are not us. They do not belong. They are deadly hunters, and their purpose is to blend in and kill. They will kill children and mothers and helpless women. They show no mercy.
A handful of people have been chosen to rise up against them, to infiltrate them, to wipe them out. Twelve. Our purpose is kept a secret and our identities remain hidden.
Our mission is to take out the Others, to wipe them out, to destroy them. Take wary in what you see. Look beyond it.
Because in this world, everyone is prey.
How does it sound? And if it is like anything else you have heard of, please tell me. And if you don't like it, be honest, state why and give an alternative. Anyways, to the BQ's.
BQ: Where do you write your stories, and for how long
BQ2: Give me a brief sentence about your book. Do you plan on getting it published?
BQ3 (answer only if publishing) Who do you want to be publish your book?
BQ4: Do you have an agent, and what are the strong points of having one?
BQ5: Any tips when publishing?
BQ6: What font do you write in, and why?
BQ7: How long (ideally) should an author write for?
BQ8: When sending a cover letter to the publisher, is it okay to state the illustratior/choice of illustrators you wish to illustrate the books (and tips on cover letters)
Thanx and have a nice day!