How does my poetry sound?

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On a scale of 1 to 10, rate this. I'm 15. I wrote this for my cousin who died the day after my birthday. I am told I should pursue writing as a career, and i enjoy writing. Please rate.

"This is my letter of love,
To the one who rests above.
Away took you, the eternal sleep,
I pray you rest in peace."

Tell me what you think, this is only the first stanza. I'd appreciate it!!
 
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