Hey I wrote a poem at school. We had to write it about this picture of a massive lightning bolt coming from green clouds over a city. Everyone said it was really good. Are they just saying that?
Darkness in the cold night sky
as the city sleeps
green dragons roaring flying high
the clouds begin to weep
then noise so loud it rips a jagged
cut in the heavens high
fire bursts out, raw and ragged
small children start to cry
the thunderous bolt of terror and death
crashes to the ground
then disappears in half a breath
without a trace of sound...
Sorry i cant find the picture.
but is it good?
Darkness in the cold night sky
as the city sleeps
green dragons roaring flying high
the clouds begin to weep
then noise so loud it rips a jagged
cut in the heavens high
fire bursts out, raw and ragged
small children start to cry
the thunderous bolt of terror and death
crashes to the ground
then disappears in half a breath
without a trace of sound...
Sorry i cant find the picture.
but is it good?