How do you like these thoughts I just wrote into a poem?

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"Cut me a piece. of any size, large or small!" a plead that beats lower my knees.
Like insects rushing poignantly, with the pitter patter of hungry feet, I'll snatch a crumb, a mildewed one, to curdle you close to the plug. For to gag our hearts, is much unto our hunger; a taste bitter in tart, rumbles louder asunder. What we feel will run under and over our shoulders, a cascade of thunder, that can crack this old boulder.
Thanks Ash, opinion is opinion, and that's what I'm looking for! =D even if u don't like it lmao.
 
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