How do you like my poetry version of the act of taking a shower and the like?

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The hair seems
To like it
When it can
Witness
Off-white
Sheets of plastic
Enshroud the body
That is rests on
Effectively closing them in
The four walled prison

It really enjoys
The shampoo bottle
With all the
Sorts of angles
That a statuesque woman possesses
Open it’s top cap
And releases
A eucalyptus aroma
With refreshing mint
That makes it curl
In anticipation
Down to it’s very
Very split ends

But above all else
It goes crazy
With absolute glee
When that sweetened
Viscous fluid
Is poured into
The nearest available
Fleshy palm
And mashed deeply
Within the scratchy
Yet smooth texture
Straight to the roots
Of the waves
Of vibrant auburn tresses
Effectively washing away
No…
Purging away
Every single bit of grime
Which flows out
From within each crevice
And trickles down
The stress weary body
Allowing the multicolored mess
To mix with frothy bubbles
And sink down
Between the sharp pinpricks
Eventually meeting
It’s very own
Watery grave
Of God knows what
 
Probably the best description of a woman shampooing her hair that I have ever read, very good work
 
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