How do you like my plot for my novel? tips help help?

Jane

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(rewrite the story make it good and you win)
Jean read it to herself:

Jean I think you look beautiful!

She wanted look like she wasn't fazed by the complement. She smiled at him quick enough so Catherine couldn't see. Her eyes dropped down to her cell phone which she hid under the table as she tried to text him back the word, Womanizer. He read the text like it wasn't someone he didn't have to hide from Catherine even though he knew he had to hide it. He knew she liked him more then a friend. He smiled at Jean as if they were sharing a secret.

Catherine could see Jean and Jammy exchange glances. She began to feel left out but jealous more then anything. She took out her cell phone. She mouthing the words she used as she texted. Jean was just about to text Jammy to stop texting. She suddenly received a text from Catherine:

I know two are texting!

Jean smiled, she texted back:
 
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