How do you like my last minute poem?Please read?

Beth

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What I mean by last minute is the fact that I am writing this as I go along just because I'm bored. So its not like I put a whole lot of thought into it...enjoy!

Running from the past
I try to hide my tears
Always feeling last
I'm living in fears

There is no way to say
What its like with no light
I just fight my way
Through the dark night

I see no knight
No hero to set me free
I close my eyes before the fright
What is wrong with me

I gasp no air
I feel no shame
I reach for nothing there
Like drowning in rain

And now I see
In the moments past
What my life is to be
If I stay to be last

Ok...so now I've read it over and it kinda makes sense but then it doesn't. Do you think it makes sense? If so, what do you think its about?(Cause I have no clue!) Thanks for reading!
 
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