How do i write good lyrics?

Happy Girl

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i've written some songs but i hate them
people say they're amazing but i don't believe them
i write something like



Keep yor head up
I'll be there to pull you aside
C'mon Stand up
you know when it is or ain't right

You let them push you
why don't you do it your own way?
take your time, being mine
so that way it would be fair

we both win this situation
i believe we do it right
when i look for my direction
i stand right by your side

Whoa
It's another day like that
it's all the mess that you can get
all of your friends,all of my mates
it just another phase
we've been already to that place
can't we just say we don't care?
It's another day like that

too many troubles
but i won't let this touch us again
won't stand between us
if you take me by the hand

i thing it's stupid
it's not that bad but i don't like it
when i read Simple Plan or Miley Cyrus lyrics i wanna throw my song away lol
 
if what you write comes straight from your heart the is great!!!
i really liked it!!!
why don't you put some music and rhytm!?!?
you ll love it as soon as you ll hear the perfect melody for it!!
:-)
keep up!
 
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