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Pumpkin

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...you!? For a long time, human rights were classified as being part of either the first, second, or third generation of human rights. Today, we must go past this and broaden our scope. To understand human rights as a whole, we must look at them through these two divisions: civil and political rights and economic, social and cultural rights. Moreover; it is necessary to address, to link and to integrate human rights, democracy and development in a Unitarian fashion. The international, financial and economic crisis has already fractured the world; thereby, commanding it in an imperative way.
 
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