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"Even the smallest of sparks can burst into a mighty flame with the right encouragement. From what appears to be only an inkblot, can instead be a world of imagination. With the right treatment, every bud blooms into a flower. Even the smallest of people—like Kolo Ryu—can a mighty dragon rupture through. How the dragon erupts, though, depends on the path taken. A path that leads to destruction can bring a dark heart to form. But from a path that is uncontaminated, a path as pure as the whitest of flowers, do the best of souls form." This is the beginning to my story. I guess it'll be a fantasy. The character has been stated. He's a loner. : D Any advice on how to make it better? P.S. Anyone got good character names that I might be able to use? Thanks