How are these lyrics I wrote?

[HendrixIsFender]

When I see myself

And the life that I'm living

I think about all the times I was lost and confused

Now I'm grown up, I've gotta fill up these shoes



In a world I didn't make

And a life I didn't create

I gotta live every moment like it's the only,

Like it's the only one I've got



Can someone save me

Can someone hear me

'Cause I can barely breathe

And if you'd please

Let me know I'm still alive



Kicking and screaming

I was born this way

Like I fighter in the dark

I say these things to myself



A lonely city, where I can't find forgiveness

For all that I've done

And the monster I've become

Scares me, while I walk under the sun



Never knowing wrong from right

And I don't even know

Who I am, In spite of all I believe



I thought I was not like that

And I thought I was stronger

But I discover things I should never see

All the sadness is killing me



Sometimes when I'm alone

And when no one bothers to carry me when I can't stand

I get back on my feet again

And I say 'no hard feelings'

I look them in the eye and shake their hands



Nobody wants to listen

And I'm hurt far beyond repair

Now I'm learning once again

Life ain't gonna be fair



Can someone save me

Can someone hear me

'Cause I can barely breathe

And if you'd please

Let me know I'm still alive



Living like I don't matter

And lurking in shadows

I can always climb up the ladder

And find the candle light



Save me, please

Just save me now

And lift my broken body off of the ground

'Cause I want to live