these are my lyrics i have wrote but i have no idea if they are good or not and i just need an opinion before i keep going.
"one day your gone next day im writing this song making a beat and hoping to make it taking all the memories turning them into stories feeling lonely as i slowly fade to the darkness and no one takes notice as i remaness on my bed i love you but you still ripped my heart in two i sit back watch the world forget me as i sink into the shadows you rise above me ive had enough i break out lay the ink take charge and fly like an arrow reach my target i was aiming for my body is sore as i walk out the door i look into my core i see im amazing the fire inside me blazing"
i wrote it real quick so dont be to harsh haha but still be honest please
"one day your gone next day im writing this song making a beat and hoping to make it taking all the memories turning them into stories feeling lonely as i slowly fade to the darkness and no one takes notice as i remaness on my bed i love you but you still ripped my heart in two i sit back watch the world forget me as i sink into the shadows you rise above me ive had enough i break out lay the ink take charge and fly like an arrow reach my target i was aiming for my body is sore as i walk out the door i look into my core i see im amazing the fire inside me blazing"
i wrote it real quick so dont be to harsh haha but still be honest please