Honest poem criticism, please? HoNeSt?

Jordan

New member
"My Words"
~
I can hear the rain
sitting on my bed
it's dark outside
people are sleeping
~
I tell them all my feelings
my pencil and my notebook
because they always listen
they never interrupt
~
The graphite on the paper
makes words
sometimes they rhyme
it's beautiful
~
I'm afraid to show people
my words
they might take them
and lie
~
But I show some people
and I'm glad
they say my words
are beautiful
~

=)
I'm 14, by the way.
(to first answerer) Ugh come on! I hate those stupid advertisements. >=/
 
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