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Armando

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Mentally Entwined


Bite your lips,
Go ahead, moan.
I’m about to enter…
The vessels of your virginal mind;
A mind left veiled,
Untouched by appeasing thoughts.

~

As I begin to denude your shyness,
You spread the fleshy door that
Leads me to your thought process;
A paradise of fluorescent fantasies
That have long before craved intellectual penetration.

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The vessel walls are covered
In scintillating steam,
By the not so sexual acts
Our thoughts performed…
One gasping breath and finally,
A full release of endorphin.

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The cacophony of once somber thoughts,
Is now filled with perfect symphony…
The music of mental stimulation (compatibility)
Fills our very thoughts
With provocative lexicon.
 
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