Hidden Poet in the mists..?

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The mother f**king truth

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I show next to nobody my poetry, but now I am starting to realise, I am not the only one who writes in such a manner.. so here goes:

Swept into veriest dalliance shamefacedly, brilliant dark snow clouds devour the land, to them i am just another person about to get covered in snow, just another of the human flock.

ok that's not so good but it's how i was feeling, it doesn't really have a title,

ok here's another: The promising youth slowly consumes all until it has a mind of its own, its trickery knows no bounds, as the wise locked up eyes send a message in spite, we know we will realise one day, but we prolong the inevitable at every chance..

Yeah, i don't believe in titles, it pretty much means a label.

soooo how'd i do? (:
 
"veriest dalliance"?
That's a joke, right?
You're obviously fascinated by words. You just need to think about the reader, and what might be meaningful and interesting to him/her.
 
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