heyyy new poem is it bad? and any good titles?

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my heart stopped beating
when you looked me in the eyes
it just stopped beating ba ba ba beating

i couldn't breathe
when you talked to me
i just stopped breathing ba ba ba breathing

i opened my mouth
and nothing came out

my heart started beating
ba ba ba beating
I started breathing
ba ba ba breathing
see what you do to me
 
at first your heart stops beating and you can't breath and then you can? well it's pretty good
 
Um... it's alright, I guess but it was kind of redundant. I don't like the 'ba ba ba' part. That might be used in a song, how the person sings it, but it may not be the best choice in a poem. It's not very original too.
 
You should call it "Frozen" and set it to a beat. Turn it into a song. And it's awesome.
 
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