please answer honestly.. i wont get offended or anything is my first poem i ever wrote and i did it just to try something new 
strong weakness
why do people think if u strong outside u must be strong inside?
u have no dreams u r so happy
u love ur friends and they love you..
but is it true?
they think they know u,
they say they love u..
but can't they see what they do to u?
u say u kl, u neva cry, u shout and screeam...
they think u strong,
nothin can break ur heart
ur never sad..
u boss them around, like u the king
but when they tell u they problems
u try to help them
u mean but helpfull..
strong but careing..
about everyone but what about u?
u loud outside, but inside is quiet..
its like cemetery, where all of your dreams die..
u want to be thin like them models in magazine
u want to dance like them stars on mtv
u want to sing like a bird from ur garden
u want to be loved by the one u love
u want to say thats ur dreams.. but does anyone care?
does anyone help u?
or r u to strong?
that u can handle it
but does anyone know that u not that strong inside,
not even a little beat?
or not even at all?
u more weak than they are..
and it kills when u can't show it
because u scared..
scared of the true that u r weak..
that u cry every night when noone see..
strong weakness
why do people think if u strong outside u must be strong inside?
u have no dreams u r so happy
u love ur friends and they love you..
but is it true?
they think they know u,
they say they love u..
but can't they see what they do to u?
u say u kl, u neva cry, u shout and screeam...
they think u strong,
nothin can break ur heart
ur never sad..
u boss them around, like u the king
but when they tell u they problems
u try to help them
u mean but helpfull..
strong but careing..
about everyone but what about u?
u loud outside, but inside is quiet..
its like cemetery, where all of your dreams die..
u want to be thin like them models in magazine
u want to dance like them stars on mtv
u want to sing like a bird from ur garden
u want to be loved by the one u love
u want to say thats ur dreams.. but does anyone care?
does anyone help u?
or r u to strong?
that u can handle it
but does anyone know that u not that strong inside,
not even a little beat?
or not even at all?
u more weak than they are..
and it kills when u can't show it
because u scared..
scared of the true that u r weak..
that u cry every night when noone see..